Thief description & grammar fixes (#22951)

* Thief description & grammar fixes

* sad

* cant do that sad

diff --git a/Resources/Locale/en-US/game-ticking/game-presets/preset-thief.ftl b/Resources/Locale/en-US/game-ticking/game-presets/preset-thief.ftl
index 4a037351cad80fefd3fb023235beba0de84d1663..db1404e09b1d340c74b0f580d17e5521a4613895 100644 (file)
--- a/Resources/Locale/en-US/game-ticking/game-presets/preset-thief.ftl
+++ b/Resources/Locale/en-US/game-ticking/game-presets/preset-thief.ftl
@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
-thief-role-greeting-human = 
-    You are a criminal scum.
-    You want to add to your collection
-    some property of Nanotrasen station. 
-    You're not a murderer. 
-    You are forbidden to kill.
+thief-role-greeting-human =
+    You are criminal scum, a kleptomaniac
+    previously arrested and on parole for petty theft.
+    You need to add more to your collection.
+    You were forcibly given a pacifism implant after your last arrest,
+    but that can't stop you from getting your fix by any means necessary.
 
-thief-role-greeting-animal = 
+thief-role-greeting-animal =
     You are a kleptomaniaс animal.
-    Steal things you like.
+    Steal things that you like.
 
-thief-role-greeting-equipment = 
-    You have a toolbox of thief's 
-    tools and chameleon thief's gloves.
+thief-role-greeting-equipment =
+    You have a toolbox of thieves'
+    tools and chameleon thieves' gloves.
     Choose your starting equipment,
     and do your work stealthily.
 
 objective-issuer-thief = [color=#746694]Criminal[/color]
 
-thief-round-end-agent-name = thief
\ No newline at end of file
+thief-round-end-agent-name = thief

diff --git a/Resources/Locale/en-US/objectives/conditions/steal.ftl b/Resources/Locale/en-US/objectives/conditions/steal.ftl
index bce645da8e8bff3c548e18582f0c29ba334e2a88..00c8e0fdaf93adbbd627f44d299fbe1016a2bc73 100644 (file)
--- a/Resources/Locale/en-US/objectives/conditions/steal.ftl
+++ b/Resources/Locale/en-US/objectives/conditions/steal.ftl
@@ -6,6 +6,6 @@ objective-condition-steal-description = We need you to steal {$itemName}. Don't
 objective-condition-steal-station = station
 objective-condition-steal-Ian = head of personnel's corgi
 
-objective-condition-thief-description = The {$itemName} would be a great addition to my collection! 
+objective-condition-thief-description = The {$itemName} would be a great addition to my collection!
 objective-condition-thief-animal-description = The {$itemName} would be a great addition to my collection! Most importantly, alive.
-objective-condition-thief-multiply-description = I need to get {$count} {$itemName} and take them with me.
\ No newline at end of file
+objective-condition-thief-multiply-description = I need to get {$count} {MAKEPLURAL($itemName)} and take them with me.

diff --git a/Resources/Locale/en-US/thief/backpack.ftl b/Resources/Locale/en-US/thief/backpack.ftl
index bdc463fc2aa22b950d62fd08522b4c2f796796bd..a09c3e9ee365ca231a51dd3603760de49ec6303c 100644 (file)
--- a/Resources/Locale/en-US/thief/backpack.ftl
+++ b/Resources/Locale/en-US/thief/backpack.ftl
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-thief-backpack-window-title = Thief toolbox
+thief-backpack-window-title = thief toolbox
 
-thief-backpack-window-description = 
-    This toolbox is filled with unspecified contents. 
-    Now you need to remember what you put in it. 
+thief-backpack-window-description =
+    This toolbox is filled with unspecified contents.
+    Now you need to remember what you put in it.
     Choose up to two different sets from the list.
 
 thief-backpack-window-selected = Kits selected: ({$selectedCount}/{$maxCount})
@@ -13,50 +13,50 @@ thief-backpack-button-deselect = Select [X]
 
 # Sets
 
-thief-backpack-category-chameleon-name = Chameleon's kit.
-thief-backpack-category-chameleon-description = 
-    Includes a full set of clothing that contain 
-    chameleon technology, allowing you to disguise 
+thief-backpack-category-chameleon-name = chameleon's kit
+thief-backpack-category-chameleon-description =
+    Includes a full set of clothing that contain
+    chameleon technology, allowing you to disguise
     as pretty much anything on the station.
 
-thief-backpack-category-tools-name = Bearcatcher's kit
-thief-backpack-category-tools-description = 
-    A set of tools for roughing up doors, walls, windows, 
-    and anything else that for whatever reason doesn't 
-    want to let you in where you need to go. 
-    Includes two C4s, a multitool, jaws of life, 
+thief-backpack-category-tools-name = bearcatcher's kit
+thief-backpack-category-tools-description =
+    A set of tools for roughing up doors, walls, windows,
+    and anything else that for whatever reason doesn't
+    want to let you in where you need to go.
+    Includes two C4s, a multitool, jaws of life,
     a pair of advanced welder meson glasses and some insulated gloves.
 
-thief-backpack-category-chemistry-name = Chemistry kit
-thief-backpack-category-chemistry-description = 
-    A set for those who love to improve their body. 
-    It includes a storage implanter, 
-    a dna scrambler implanter, 
+thief-backpack-category-chemistry-name = chemistry kit
+thief-backpack-category-chemistry-description =
+    A set for those who love to improve their body.
+    It includes a storage implanter,
+    a DNA scrambler implanter,
     and a set of chemicals for a rainy day.
 
-thief-backpack-category-syndie-name = Syndie kit
-thief-backpack-category-syndie-description = 
-    A set of items from a syndicate agent you've robbed 
+thief-backpack-category-syndie-name = syndie kit
+thief-backpack-category-syndie-description =
+    A set of items from a syndicate agent you've robbed
     in the past. Includes an Agent ID card, a syndicate pAI,
     and some strange red crystals.
 
-thief-backpack-category-sleeper-name = Sleepwalker's kit
-thief-backpack-category-sleeper-description = 
+thief-backpack-category-sleeper-name = sleepwalker's kit
+thief-backpack-category-sleeper-description =
     A set for those who like to sleep in,
-    or for everyone around you to sleep. 
-    Includes a set of nocturine vials, a hypopen and 
+    or for everyone around you to sleep.
+    Includes a set of nocturine vials, a hypopen and
     a tank of sleeping gas.
 
-thief-backpack-category-communicator-name = Communicator's kit
-thief-backpack-category-communicator-description = 
+thief-backpack-category-communicator-name = communicator's kit
+thief-backpack-category-communicator-description =
     A communication enthusiast's kit. Includes a master key
-    for all station channels, a radio jammer, a portable 
+    for all station channels, a radio jammer, a portable
     crew monitor, a voice chameleon mask and lots of money for business deals.
 
-thief-backpack-category-smuggler-name = Smuggler's kit
-thief-backpack-category-smuggler-description = 
-    A kit for those who like to have big pockets. 
-    Includes a fulton beacon, ten fultons 
-    and an invisible crate. You can't move in them, 
+thief-backpack-category-smuggler-name = smuggler's kit
+thief-backpack-category-smuggler-description =
+    A kit for those who like to have big pockets.
+    Includes a fulton beacon, ten fultons
+    and an invisible crate. You can't move in them,
     but you can quickly hide or carry valuable loot.
     This kit also has a cool void cloak to go along with it.